The following was written and typed up by my 7 year old daughter, Imogen, although she has reassured my that it’s still a work in progress. Well, “It’s not finished yet, Daddy,” were her words.
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Autumn Poem by Imogen May Barber.
Beautiful leaves are falling.
Falling on teds head.
Teddy likes to run around so the leaves
can spread. Autumn leaves are falling
teddy dreams of snow until then were
running through the leaves we go
Autumn leaves are different colours like brown,yellow and orange. I like to run through the leaves and make a big big mess.
The days get shorter and the nights get longer. I am lying in my bed dreaming of fun things for me and Ted.
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I’m sure you will forgive a 7 year old for any grammatical errors, we make enough of them ourselves! Ha!
I’ve not changed anything on the above. It is shown how it was written. She told me that she’s not happy with some of the second part but I told her never to delete anything, sentences can always be cut out and pasted back in somewhere else.
She thought I was silly!
Let her know what you think.
Have a great Sunday.